Friday, September 10, 2010

Together to Beersheba

So I am obliged to admit that I still go to High Holy Day services every year, principally because it pleases my mother, although I'm also grudgingly obliged to admit that I like the high holy day liturgies, or at least, I have a sentimental attachment, and I like the songs. Anyway, the parsha for the second day (read in the morning services at most Reform temples) is the 22nd chapter of Genesis, which is the story for God commanding Abraham to sacrifice Isaac. During the Rabbi's interminable sermon on the subject (there is quite possibly nothing less interesting that Midrashic commentary on what happens to Isaac between his escaping the blade and then reappearing a few chapters and a couple of decades later in order to get married cast in vague and inoffensive terms as a tale of self-actualization; yoy), I drifted, but I was recalled to consciousness briefly and found, to my surprise and delight, that the Rabbi was actually quoting my favorite Wilfred Owen poem, "The Parable of the Old Men and the Young":

So Abram rose, and clave the wood, and went,
And took the fire with him, and a knife.
And as they sojourned both of them together,
Isaac the first-born spake and said, My Father,
Behold the preparations, fire and iron,
But where the lamb for this burnt-offering?
Then Abram bound the youth with belts and straps,
And builded parapets and trenches there,
And stretchèd forth the knife to slay his son.
When lo! an Angel called him out of heaven,
Saying, Lay not thy hand upon the lad,
Neither do anything to him, thy son.
Behold! Caught in a thicket by its horns,
A Ram. Offer the Ram of Pride instead.

But the old man would not so, but slew his son,
And half the seed of Europe, one by one.
Owen's occasional weakness is his anachronism; even in the 'teens, some of his thees and thous were starting to sound a little silly, although let's be fair, that huckster Yeats, the Robert Frost of Ireland, generally accounted a far greater poet that Owen, produced plenty of hackneyed, stilted tripe (along with some legitimate masterworks, fine, ok, fine) filled with similar diction. But Owen's subtle prosody and masterful experimentation with off-rhyme and partial consonance are important and innovative in their own right, and I believe that he was more than just an inventive wordsmith who by dint of subject matter produced memorable works, but one of the great poets of the first half of the twentieth century, and one of the greatest chroniclers of war in English. The "Parable" showcases his formal invention--it is in effect a sonnet in blank verse with a singly rhymed couplet, although it almost fools you into thinking its rhymed throughout--and is remarkable and subtle in the way it both does and does not turn the Biblical account of Avram's almost-sacrifice on its head.

19 comments:

mds said...

"Isaac the first-born"

Wait, what? Burning the books isn't enough for these people, they have to go back in time and wipe out the existence of Abraham's actual firstborn?

[FRANTICALLY OPENS MOBY DICK]

"Call me Bubs."

Damn you, Palin! Damn you to hell.

J said...

Monsieur, have you ever read Brideshead Revisited? I just started it last night, and the Anthony Blanche character made me think of you.

IOZ said...

Brideshead is great. It is the only Waugh that I've even really liked. I am a sucker for Catholic conversion stories.

Anonymous said...

More or less on topic -- I love Ron Paul:

"...A Republican congressman, Ron Paul, of Texas, questioned whether the burning would make a difference to how Americans were perceived abroad.

"Our policies of torture, targeted assassination, invasion of Muslim countries and unintended infliction of civilian casualties in Iraq, Afghanistan and Pakistan are also provocative," he said.

"Pictures of victims of torture as well as innocent people killed by drones and stray bombs are every bit as bad as burning the Koran."

Naturally this was only picked up by a newspaper in the Antipodes.

Anonymous said...

Are we gonna split hairs here?

Anonymous said...

"huckster" ?

At least WBY realized the hackneyed and stilted qualities of his early tripe and officially rejected it.

Unlike some bloggers who will milk the last driblet out of the only style they have ...

Anonymous said...

Two roads diverged in a yellow wood.

Anonymous said...

Indeed, even for a quasy illiterate like me RLF seemed overrated. But, it was wartime and limeys HAD to flatter the Yanqui yokels on sumtin.

Capt'n Obvious

IOZ said...

Boy, someone sure is perne in a gyre.

Enron said...

The musaf service takes forever, though.

Michael Smith said...

I live next to a synagogue, and there was a guy -- probably borrowed from the trumpet section of the Philharmonic -- wailin' on the shofar in there yesterday to beat the band. I really wanted to convert. It went on for a good five minutes. A sort of hypnotic Philip Glass iterative thing -- a long long long-winded slightly wobbly fundamental pitch and then a hop up, very brief, to the second harmonic, the fifteenth. And then to conclude he took a big breath and stayed on that fundamental note for longer than your average pearl-diver could stay underwater. Wonderful, wonderful stuff.

Anonymous said...

It would have been funnier if you had said, "Boy, someone's knickers are perned in a gyre".

Mimi said...

What about "Disabled?" The kid's in a wheelchair "legless, sewn short at elbow"--an incredibly skillful phrase. When he was whole, and playing games, "He liked a blood-smear down his leg..."
Don't know how anybody can read that and still "support our troops" and our endless wars.

J said...

You're right Monsieur, Brideshead was great. (Although I also liked Vile Bodies and Decline & Fall, so maybe I enjoyed different aspects than you.) I'm curious about any other Catholic conversion novels you were suckered into enjoying.

Have you read any Camus - if so, is there one in particular you would rec.?

Myles SG said...

"Brideshead is great. It is the only Waugh that I've even really liked."

Thank goodness that IOZ and I actually share some similar literary tastes, despite our vehement disagreement re: Franzen.

IOZ said...

Graham Greene, esp. Brighton Rock, J.

Anonymous said...

"the appalling strangeness of the mercy of God", as you are wont to oft recall, IOZ.

however, there is another aphorism in the novel worth recalling:

corruptio optimae est pessima.

Anonymous said...

oh yes ... I forgot to mention that "corruptio optimae est pessima" is what the conductor calls out at the Last Exit to Brooklyn

MacLeodCartoons said...

I think Owen's grim 'Mental Cases' is pretty good too, and fairly relevant for our current situation where one in five of those returning from Iraq and Afghanistan have PTSD:
"Thus their hands are plucking at each other;
Picking at the rope-knouts of their scourging;
Snatching after us who smote them, brother,
Pawing us who dealt them war and madness."